Good Luck Girls by Charlotte Nicole Davis – ARC Book Review

☆ ☆ ☆ 1/2

Arc provided by Tor Ten via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.

Good Luck Girls was a book that took me by surprise. The beginning completely captured my attention, the middle lost it and the end had me eager to (FINALLY) find out what would happen. The dichotomy between the start and end with the lacklustre middle of the book was quite strange. Usually books start slow and build up momentum, or vice versa. Despite this, the story still made a positive impression and is one I’d recommend people read if they’re interested in kick-ass females, Western settings and a well-written cast of diverse characters.


Westworld meets The Handmaid’s Tale in this stunning fantasy adventure from debut author Charlotte Nicole Davis.

Aster, the protector
Violet, the favorite
Tansy, the medic
Mallow, the fighter
Clementine, the catalyst


The country of Arketta calls them Good Luck Girls–they know their luck is anything but. Sold to a “welcome house” as children and branded with cursed markings. Trapped in a life they would never have chosen.

When Clementine accidentally murders a man, the girls risk a dangerous escape and harrowing journey to find freedom, justice, and revenge in a country that wants them to have none of those things. Pursued by Arketta’s most vicious and powerful forces, both human and inhuman, their only hope lies in a bedtime story passed from one Good Luck Girl to another, a story that only the youngest or most desperate would ever believe.

It’s going to take more than luck for them all to survive.

The premise of this book sounded phenomenal. I mean, how can you go wrong with a cast of characters such as this and such an intriguing story line?

The focal character Aster annoyed me SO MUCH though. I can understand why she would be apprehensive of men after her traumatic experience working as a Good Luck Girl however, there were a few cases where her unchecked anger management issues led to the neglectful care and lack of consideration for those she was unofficially in charge of. Her change toward the end of the book and character development was refreshing and (mostly) redeemed my opinion of her though.

Added on to this, the POVs at the start of the book featured Aster as well as her younger sister Clementine. I love (LOVE) books that use multiple POV and was really excited to see this at the start of the book. Then…. it went away and all we got was Aster’s POV.

This felt like such a loss as the cast of characters were really interesting and unique. I would have loved to have learnt more about them as well as have an inside look at their relationships with other members of the group. Everything felt diluted by Aster’s anger though and it was a shame to have lost that potential. This is a story that could have been amazing had it been told from five perspectives. That’s just my personal preference and opinion though. I’m aware not everyone is a fan of reading in this format.

As I mentioned at the start of this review, the middle of this book was incredibly slow. Their journey to escape felt like it dragged on endlessly. We learnt about all of the small details of their journey. While some of it was interesting, there was quite a lot of it that I would have been happy to miss out on in order to speed up the pace of the book.

Despite this, the characters and world-building were really well done. It felt original and fresh. The beginning and ending had great pacing. I loved the inclusion of paranormal elements in to this story. It created a tension at the start and end of the book that was gripping and interesting to read about. I haven’t seen this take on a Western-set book before and I can see why some reviewers have absolutely loved this book. If you don’t mind pacing issues, you’ll most likely LOVE this.

// have you read this book? what were your thoughts on it? //


8 thoughts on “Good Luck Girls by Charlotte Nicole Davis – ARC Book Review

  1. ughhhhh I hateeee that. hate when the main character is just unlikable and I want to shake some sense into them. like I feel bad but at the same time. GET IT TOGETHER. lol I love this review. this sounds like an interesting book!

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    • HAHA I’m glad I’m not the only one. It was so frustrating because all of the elements for an amazing book were RIGHT THERE and I just couldn’t connect because of how frustrated I was with her!


  2. This book sounds very good! Sad to hear the middle was not as good, and that the main character was annoying.. I might still pick it up!
    Great review 🙂


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  3. I definitely agree with your review. Aster made some very questionable decisions nad I always found myself being like, “Girl, what are you doing?!”. I think that I enjoyed it overall because it was such a unique book featuring the west.


  4. Great review, Jen! I’m really curious about this book but I’ve started to really see some mixed reviews about it. I’m not much for “Westerns” but this concept sounds really intriguing! I’m not keen on the fact the MC was so annoying though. That always loses points in a book for me. Likable characters really play a big role in the story for me… Defo still curious to give it a go though. Hopefully I’ll enjoy it too 🙂

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    • I hope so! The females were so strong and the diversity of characters was really great. I think this could have just been a case of me not connecting to the MC. If you connect with her this will most likely be a 4 or 5 star read 😀 Jen


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